I feel like my writing is difficult to be understood.. because of several reasons.
1. I cannot communicate my idea clearly, so I just typed rough idea and plan to revise it later
2. Some idea really close to each other, and I cannot define how they different, so it looks like I have duplicated idea in the paper.
I tried to explain it, but because of my broken english, it takes long paragraph and seems lost the connection from the core idea.
3. My grammar and vocabulary seems doesn’t make sense, but I don’t know how to write it in the correct way. I asked for help from American friends, but I understand they cannot help me proof the whole paper.
Any suggestion is appreciate..